TNY: cartoon in today, reject tomorrow!


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Got this cartoon in this week’s The New Yorker. Sold last winter, the caption has been slightly modified by suggestion from my editor (originally had been: “Look honey! I got a brand new huge red bow for our car!”).

I still have the list of alternate captions, ten in all! (He thought it was too wordy. I thought, then why waste more words talking about it? But I’m absolutely amenable to criticism, and was very happy to get it sold and off my hands, since I’d been thinking of doing this gag for at least two years! The more concise caption works very well, I think.)

The car had originally been a dented heap, but we didn’t think readers needed to be hit over the head with the gag. So I re-did it. And there you have the life story of a published cartoon.

I’ll post a rejected cartoon tomorrow, for you to throw rotten tomatoes at, at your pleasure.

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4 Responses to “TNY: cartoon in today, reject tomorrow!”

  1. Robin Moore Says:

    I sent a cartoon to the New Yorker once just to get an official rejection letter, which I framed.

  2. Jasmin Says:

    As a copy writer (and now copy editor) I learned that the fewer words you can use to convey your meaning, the better—”if you can lose it, don’t use it!”

  3. Srini Bhukya Says:

    This is one of your best ! Great cartoon.

  4. NYkette Says:

    Ha Robin! Why be shy? Some people paper their bathrooms with rejection slips!
    Thanks Jasmin, that’s the motto we cartoonists try to live by. But we always break down and try to slip an extra word or syllable in now and then!
    And thanks for the vote of confidence, Srini!

    Good night everyone!

    ;-)


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