More layering practice: Trouble in Paradise

Well, I had already done my fun drawings from Trouble in Paradise, but had not figured out how to color them in. So here’s my second try at inking with layers.
Here’s what it looked like before inking and a little repositioning, just india ink on paper, then scanned:

I’m not sure which I prefer. I had thought the B&W one was too rough looking, and quite liked adding in grays with the layering. They I got into coloring the rest in, probably inspired by DIVYA SRINIVASAN’s illo last week.
See my previous Trouble in Paradise attempts (of Miriam Hopkins), a few posts down.
These are the reference photos besides the actual movie that I used to guide me. For the Miriam Hopkins, in my previous post, I drew directly from the screen. (On pause, of course!):
1- for her body
2- for her face
3- for his pose
